Now that we have a superhero ready in terms of superpowers and looks, we will think about how he gained powers.
Do you think a random backstory will work? Will it convince people to accept the superhero? A good backstory will make or break the deal for you.
The making of Ironman
Anthony Edward Stark (Tony Stark) is the son of wealthy industrialist and head of Stark Industries, Howard Stark, and Maria Stark. He is a genius and obtains many degrees by the time he is 15. After his parents are killed in a car accident, he inherits his father's company.
Knowing about the genius nature of Tony Stark, enemy army led by Wong-Chu captures him and orders him to build weapons for them. He secretly makes an armoured suit which is capable of warfare and can fly through the air. He uses the suit to destroy Wong-Chu’s military base and escape from there.
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He then modifies and adds more weapons and features to his suit which is the one that is seen today as the gold and red suit.
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Batman -Origins
This is about a 6-year-old falling into darkness and meeting a nightmare
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Bruce was a happy child leading a happy life. He was on a picnic with his parents one day, chasing a rabbit, when he fell through a hole he hadn’t seen.
He knew his father would come for him, but it was dark, and he was hurt, and the cave was very big. Then he was afraid. He tried to tell himself that it was okay because his father was coming, but it was coming closer and his father was taking so long…
He was not prepared for what came out of the darkness. A bat! There was only him and this thing in front of him. He was very afraid and helpless. Bruce’s father did come for him, of course. Bruce was okay. His parents cleaned his knee and put a bandage on it, and everything was okay again.
Two years later, his parents took him to the movies. He wanted to see The Mark of Zorro, because he liked the dashing hero with his smile and his cape. While they were walking, a street thug came and shot his parents.
That day, young Bruce Wayne decided to fight crime once he grew up and kept on learning about crime fighting techniques till the day he was ready. He did fight a few criminals in normal clothes but he wanted to scare his enemies and dominate them. Then he remembered that one creature that scared him in the dark- a bat!.
"I must have a disguise. Criminals are a superstitious cowardly lot. So my disguise must be able to strike terror into their hearts. I must be a creature of the night, black, terrible...a...a...a bat!"
– Bruce Wayne – Detective Comics #33 (Nov. 1939)
From that day, he became batman.
The above were the origin stories of two of the most famous superheroes. Which one did you like?
Let us see what goes into making a good backstory.
1. Let the hero earn the the superpower for himself: It is always better to let the superhero work hard for the superpowers than earning it by luck or by birth. This will put some value into the character’s superpower while the reader reads it.
People are more likely to respect a poor man who became a millionaire by his hard work than a millionaire who was born as one. The same applies to superpowers as well.